Wednesday, November 4, 2009

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Rating: 2.8

Am being sent to, sent to
A fine finishing school
For a refresher course
for a refresher course
...
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Mamta Agarwal
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Vidi Writes 08 November 2009

Wow what a lovely rhythm and move Swirling words and roaming lines... prove A point, which is beyond all doubts to love. There no way to please all Live and let live.... Wonderful write.... smooth flow With a perfect theme in light.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 November 2009

good poem Mamta...you must have a reason to tell you this...the concluding lines hold powerful words...they read soft and sweet albeit...10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 04 November 2009

discipline seems a cramped behaviour anatural swan everybody could be if they will and desire...live and let live life naturally seems best...10

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Ranjit Ravindran 04 November 2009

Liked it ma'am.. 'Who cares about disapproval, There is no way to please people, All I ask is to live and let live Or else something’s gotta give. '.......... Excellent A sweet 10. Ranjit

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Milica Franchi De Luri 04 November 2009

'there is no way to please people, all i ask is to live and let live'...........very meaningful.........i've tried it and couldn't do it........

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