Sunday, February 11, 2007

Something Precious Lost Too Soon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is not a tale that is easily remembered
Nor a tale that should be
How she lost her virginity
To a man she thought she had befriended
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Alison Smith
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David Harris 11 February 2007

Alison, another good poem tackling a subject others might deter from. Nicely worded away from being vulgar which a subject of this nature could easily turn into in the wrong hands. Good write. David

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Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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