Tuesday, February 14, 2006

Something Practical For Valentine Comments

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There sits, atop a cherry tree
a bird that badly needs to pee.
He's eaten cherries to his fill
and now is bloated, feeling ill.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Gina Onyemaechi 14 February 2006

You old romantic, you! : -) G.

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Allan James Saywell 14 February 2006

well i'm going to buy my woman knee-pads, i want to protect her lovely knee's when she gets down to scrubbing and all that rubbing i dont want her complaining when i receive my valentines gift, that carpet is a great equalizer when it comes to knees but i must say Herbert i feel there is a double meaning in your poem have the critics been nice to you lately Warm regards AJS

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