Wednesday, May 4, 2022

Something Pierces My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Something pierces my heart
‘tis sharper than a sword, and
Spear of any knight…
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COMMENTS
Maria Mitea 21 May 2022

Great work! Congratulations dear Gabriel

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

I'm grateful for the comment, please do check my new poems.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 May 2022

Conmgrats, dear Gabriel, being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, amazing poem about my topic, true enjoyable read 5 Stars full. Since this POD was poblished 2 days ago, I gave this marvelous poem 5 Stars, but my comments did not show up, how terrible, but here I am.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 03 June 2022

Thank you M's Sylvia for this kind gesture. I'm very grateful... By the way I learn from the best mentor.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

Thanks for your comment, it has been a great inspiration for me to continue. Much love for you.

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Nabakishore Dash 19 May 2022

congratulations dear Gabriel for this excellent poem, particularly the line that it subdues my laugh of hate is echoing in mind.Awesome poem on true love.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

Thanks for your comment, it inspires me to continue. I have also written fiction. I love to share if message me.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 May 2022

Gabe, this is a beautiful and proper poem Bravo! Bravo!

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

Thanks for your comment, it has been a great inspiration for me to continue. I have also just finished writing a novel. I love to share if message me.

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Chinedu Dike 19 May 2022

A poignant piece of poetry written from the heart. Congrats on your poem's selection as POD.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

Thanks for your comment, it has really been a grease to my elbow, and I have also just finished writing a novel. I love to share if message me.

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