Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Something My Heart Cannot Forget! Comments

Rating: 4.5

What is it that's awakened?
Almost a tear, almost a memory
A feeling so lonely succumbs
A memory that fades
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Deepti Agarwal
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Deepti Agarwal 18 May 2008

thank you Kesav fr finding it 10 on the scale... :)

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Kesav Easwaran 18 May 2008

deepti, the feelings you wanted to bring out through this poem have come off very well in these lines. a poem touching reader's mind...a ten for this

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Saurabh Som 04 May 2008

a little spelling mistake ma'am.... 'The '''ghaost''' uncaptured ' [: P]............... otherwise................. amazing

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linzi- kidd 02 April 2008

maybe what ur forgeting is a person that has left ur life.. idk..but this is rlly good.!

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