Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, March 7, 2013

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I must do something more
Not with words just to adore
What do I look in her for?
Wait eagerly to dance on floor?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2013

Anette Neumann · 2 mutual friends JUst so ??v??e. ¦¦_??? ? BEAUTIFUL 6 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Harriet James likes this. Some Girl Nicely written, words of togetherness :) nice Anthony Huggup6 minutes ago very lovely

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 March 2013

Great poem! Chrissie Whitley4 minutes ago Good rhyming! Great flow. Comment +1 Great mystery in Love and waiting, wanting DrTom Miller CPhd2 minutes ago The poem today has so many of my thoughts captive and are so famimilar. Great work Comment +1 There is definitely something profound in this. Amanda Hodge5 minutes ago The feeling is definitely there. Comment +1 Very nice. Meaghan Wallace5 minutes ago I would love to see more of your work. Comment +1 long Barbara Gonzales3 minutes ago I am into short poems

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 March 2013

I must do something more Not with words just to adore

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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