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Trees would speak if we could understand;
The mountains would rise if we treat them like land;
The silence would break, if it had something to say;
But things were not made to be that way;
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I like the poem...it has a sort of domino effect to a better world......Vallerie
its a really good poem, i normally dont like reading peoples poems but i liked yours alot. i love how even with it rhyming it still sounded good, made sence, and cought my eye..it didnt trail off subject or anything. very creative too
Could somone tell me what they think about this poem? or how i can improve it?
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8/2/2025 8:28:31 AM # 1.0.0
wow good poem! i'm really bad at rhyming so i admire your ability to make a serious poem in verse. ~Rose