Friday, June 7, 2013

Something Is On Fire Comments

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Something is set on fire
It smells, tell my nostrils
But the eyes deny, I See
Neither the smoke nor the object
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Abdul Wahab
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Heather Wilkins 08 June 2013

this handkerchief could be emotions on fire and smoldering. If a metaphor it is well used dear poet. nice work. I like it

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Yasmin Khan 08 June 2013

A handkerchief may be the symbol of anything...abstract or concrete and smoldering without smoke.

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Sallam Yassin 07 June 2013

Every hanker heart is setting on the fire fire of desire Chief well done and the taste is wild sweet

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