Tuesday, September 3, 2019

Something Is Missing Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see all the young lovers
As they go about their day;
Forgetting all their troubles
Absorbed in their joyous ways.
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Rajnish Manga 03 September 2019

Human life does not always follow a straight line. We are unique as an individual member of our society. So much similarity yet so much dissimilarity. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Dominic Windram 03 September 2019

Thanks Rajnish...I wholeheartedly agree with you. I try as best I can to reflect the whole gamut of human emotions from light to dark in my poetry

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 September 2019

Excellent poem, beautifully captured and perfectly worded. I have enjoyed this gorgeous poem. A 10 Full score and much much more! God´s Blessings.

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Dominic Windram 03 September 2019

Thanks Sylvia..much appreciated....the poem reflects how I feel from time...I'm actually quite happy currently!

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