Saturday, October 15, 2011

Something Is Missing. Comments

Rating: 5.0

My god my heart hurts so bad
Theres this constant ache
that won't go away
like somethings missing
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Kellie Teter
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Romeo Della Valle 22 October 2011

Perhaps what is missing is communication between both of you! You have to find the way to brake the ice by going places and have fun together and talk about it! This is an amazing write which clearly shows your honest feeling and poetic talent! Keep it up! Try it! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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