Saturday, December 27, 2008

Something Is Changing Comments

Rating: 4.5

Something is changing
Something deep down inside
Something is growing
And I just can’t hide
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Tim Vallie
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Marama Kelly 27 December 2008

This is really emotive and the imagery that comes forth shows one who is cool, calm and collected on the outside, but inside a turmoil is developing and is ready to explode like a volcano. The good and proper standing held and maintained is starting to buckle under the whims, desires and lusts of the soul, pushing to be freed from the prison of righteousness, propriety and dignity. The knowledge deep inside that has taken hold in the mind is, the release will come eventually because in truth such propriety is binding and restrained. There was a good flow and rhythmn in this, well worded and well expressed. Well done. Many blessings to you

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