Thursday, September 13, 2007

Something Innocent Comments

Rating: 5.0

another year has passed now
another cause for something to begin
and you could sense it on our skin
a strange and somehow cold desire...
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Jade Leven
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Kathleen Alm 26 September 2007

this poem is a very exact depiction of what is happening, not only at daces, but in our every day lives. sad, but true. you poem is so refreshing. definitely a keeper.

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Poison 9901 13 September 2007

This is truly awsome, Very nice read. Thanks so much for shareing this piece on innocents lost. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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