Thursday, May 5, 2016

Something In My Way Comments

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I see an obstacle
always a roadblock
in my dreams and when awake
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Susan Williams 07 May 2016

Ouch! That would dent anyone's optimism. Is the traffic there appalling? Or is it that deep deep down inside you'd really rather not stress out over driving when there are so many more delicious things for a poet to do- -like play with the colors and hues of words when describing a sunset over a Grecian ruin? You know we vote for stress-free poeting!

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Sofia Kioroglou 08 May 2016

Well, you got me bang to rights. Truth is I would rather not stress out over driving. I need it like a hole in the head with so many things weighing on my mind! Love your comment Susan! It is always a treat reading your comments

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Kelly Kurt 05 May 2016

I am glad I didn't have to pass a test to walk.: -) The time you learn to accept and move on is the charm, Sofia

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Sofia Kioroglou 06 May 2016

Good morning, Kelly! What a treat to turn on my PC and read your comment. It is always a pleasure to hear from you. Blessings to you and your family! Best, Sofia

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 May 2016

The flow of the poem is marvelous though coming from a pessimistic attitude. Thanks for sharing a personal temporary setback in the form of a poem.

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Sofia Kioroglou 05 May 2016

Thank you so much for stopping by and reading! I am humbled

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 May 2016

Life is like that at times! However, be positive and move on with your mind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sofia Kioroglou 05 May 2016

Thank you for stopping by and reading! Have a great day!

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