Something In Me Is Remotely Breaking Poem by Sumita Jetley

Something In Me Is Remotely Breaking

Rating: 5.0


i am standing like a wall.
today, tomorrow and may be many years from now onward.

but remotely if i sense
there is no essence

but self
who drives me
argues with me
to keep to the path

though
Something in Me is remotely breaking
for days, months and years now

my reflection is my remote identity
somewhere talking to me
nudging into me

pressing on me
'denial'

Wednesday, February 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
and, what? i am hearing the small voice that is constantly talking to me.on/off
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 07 February 2018

Sumita, such a great poem...10+++

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