Friday, September 14, 2012

Something I Shall Never Do Comments

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Something I shall never do is regret how I felt about you

When the heartbreak first set in
It hurt for so long and so bad
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Alexis ... 16 September 2012

Even though I had to learn the hard In the end I don't mind at all Beause I know that if I had a chance to go back and change time For you I would still fall Bravo my dear Miss M! ! I love the honesty in the whole poem, but especially the ending stanza. Keep it up

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Aria Siren 15 September 2012

I like this poem. Its wise beyond your years. I especially like the repeated like Something I shall never do is regret loving you and the last verse. The automatic response to heartbreak is usually regret, but you comment on the positive aspect of things, the lesson you take from it and the person it helps you to become. Nice job.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 September 2012

such a bold poem! well written!

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