Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Something Else Comments

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How would it be if you could just simply
sit within someone else mind
enter it, becomes an endless tunnel
a channel of reception.
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Kasia Fedyk
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Shelley Jones 18 July 2012

Thank you Kasia, the second stanza is certainly something on which to reflect, in great detail.

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Valerie Dohren 18 July 2012

A lovely write Kasia - you may like to read mine entitled I Am which I believe captures a similar sentiment.

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Captain Cur 18 July 2012

Beautiful Kasia, I loved this for two reasons. First it was a celebration of understanding and adventure. Second, if your imagination will allow I have an opening for a pirate, if your interested. Please send resume of foul deeds. If you have none you can make them up. And I really loved this poem'

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