Sunday, November 23, 2008
Something Done In Vengeance Comments
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This day is the day I put a culprit to rest,
I bloodied my saber inside of its chest.
I blind it with torment, cleaned out its core,
Ruptured its organs and dressed it with gore.
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Travis Lepine
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<font color=blue>Krista <font color=blue>Churchill
23 November 2008
I love the second sentence very well put.. Great poem.. Krista
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7/21/2025 12:01:22 PM # 1.0.0
Fantastic poem, the rhyme scheme did not detract me, it instead drew more of my attention to your writing.