An ocean swims in every tear drop
A river rejoices in every drop of rain
A thunder talks in every heart beat
The wind whispers in every breath
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Howard, this is a beautiful, inspiring, well-written poem. Thanks for sharing it with me. The near rhymes are particularly clever and appropriate, never forced.
An ocean swims in every tear drop A river rejoices in every drop of rain A thunder talks in every heart beat The wind laughs in every breath The sun speaks in every smile Something big in every little thing!
True masterpiece! ! Your imagery is simply magnificent. Congrats!
Very fine. This poem expresses great courage, and love to the mountain.
OOOOOOPS! ! ! ! ! I WAS CORRECT THE FIRST TIME. TOP 500 POEMS, NOT TOP 500 POETS. IT MUST BE GETTING LATE, AND/OR I AM GETTING TOO OLD. : (: (
OOPS! I SHOULD HAVE WRITTEN....PH has you at #27 on its list of Top 500 Poets, NOT 500 top poems! ! ! than IS different. i wonder if bri edwards is on the list. hmmm? i think Valsa is, but i'm not certain she is. bri (:
(CONT.) I only see ONE punctuation mark, a comma, in the whole poem, but, in this poem, the scarcity of punctuation marks bothered me very little; in some poems it bothers me a lot, and slows me down and interferes with my understanding. (CONT.)
i will TRY TO SEND OTHERS ONE MORE TIME; LUCKILY I SAVED THEM IN MICROSOFT WORD'! ! ! Ph 'says' there are 1430 comments on this poem, though many are from the author, ....not that it is his 'fault' PH counts his; I THINK PH does. this is #27 on PH's list of Top 500 Poems. i'll agree it is a likeable poem, AND i like it better than SOME others which i've read tonight from the list! ! (CONT.)
PH DOES IT AGAIN! ! ! I'VE SENT MY COMMENTS IN THREE SECTIONS AND THEY DON'T ALL APPEAR AS being SUCCESSFULLY-SENT...YET. : ( : ( bri
(CONT.) To “Free” I Flee If a dwelling is free upon the plain, I choose “free”! Also, “climbing” is…. a pain in my …… ……behind! ! TO MyPoemList yours goes. You needn’t respond to my comment on the poem’s page, as I rarely return, & never to look for a response. :) bri
Howard, what a bunch of wonderful imagery you have rattling about in that head of yours! I liked the alliteration and the way you coupled this nouns and verbs together in the various metaphors. Two lines stick out to me A library dances... and...God of the galaxies. Well done, sir.
Revisiting this one of a kind write. A highly inspirational and motivational poem. Another brilliant write from a great poet. A great nation hibernates in every child. A wonderful line from an amazing poem.
Gratitude Rose for you kind and continued affirmation!
To be able to see something big in every small thing can happen only with a person who has a generous and a compassionate heart. Howard, you are an exceptional poet who can see beyond the phenomenal world. Another wonderful poem with a great message.100+++
A beautiful poem in which opposites attract not only each other but the hearts of the captivated readers. I want PH to make this beauty Poem of the Day for a whole year. Blessings shower down on you and your pen, Howard. This gets a million 10's from me as well as a place of honor on my fav list
For a whole year Susan. Wow! Wow! Wonderful! Thanks for you amazing affirmation!
The only difference between big and small is their size and shape, not their quality and characteristics. Thank you very much for sharing this well conceived, well written poem which tells us the truth - viewing ocean through a point. Chandan
A brilliant write. Every stanza stands out in this highly inspiring poem. It is a timeless piece worth of being read again.10 and onto my Poem List.
Something big in every little thing! This simple line itself reveal s a big truth.. Extremely motivational..