Makayla Straight

Makayla Straight

I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
Wednesday, April 29, 2009

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Robin Dewalt 29 April 2009

What a rant! You must first love and respect yourself first before anyone else will. You should set this up in stanzas so it scans effectively. I love the line... I want to scream my head off, or maybe cut it off. Very original and takes the reader to your dark thoughts. Keep writing and rant away! R.

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Makayla Straight

Makayla Straight

I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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