Friday, June 11, 2010

Something About Me Comments

Rating: 4.3

Read my mind,
And you will see,
that who I am,
Isn’t what I appear to be,
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Afzal Shauq 20 June 2010

a short but with so loevly big story..hmmm love it too 10/10

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Dale Mullock 15 June 2010

Hi Sara, I like this short ditty it has a very whimsical and unfettered feel to it! Also despite its short length it has a teasing and coy feel about it! I can see it is written by someone who is young but the flow of this piece is lovely. You have a talent for sure... all you have to explore and expand on it with your feelings and imagination! Dale :)

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