Wednesday, September 18, 2013
Something About Dawn Comments
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Out there sky unfurls into daytime
Recalls a sunrise of youths first touching
As abstraction whorled into a sensation presented
A dawn on fire with its proof
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Judy Meibach
30 September 2013
I really liked this piece = I liked your word usage - your personification of the sun was outstanding
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7/18/2025 3:52:13 AM # 1.0.0
I like this piece a lot - you use some original metaphors which enhance the imagery of the poem - you kept each stanza to 4 lines, maintaining a certain rhythm that is wonderful