Sunday, January 12, 2014

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Perhaps time will move on,
She'll be a memory someday.
I've hated trying to forget her,
and she has tried moving away.
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Rishabh Bidya
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Rishabh Bidya 14 January 2014

@Valsa: Thank you Mam! ! @Kanav: :)

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Kanav Justa 14 January 2014

, , , above diamonds would be this poem of yours to gift her, , ,

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Valsa George 13 January 2014

The agony and sense of loss of two hearts once drawn closer, but made to fall apart for reasons unknown! Now the absence making the hearts grow fonder! Beautifully transferred your sentiments of love and loss in rhyming verse! Rishabh, there is a blooming poet in you! Good Luck!

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