Friday, July 1, 2011

Something Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel like I need something
Something to fill this empty void
Since you left me dry and empty
Everyday is something I hate
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent write with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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