Friday, November 22, 2013

Someplace Distant Comments

Rating: 4.8

She is staring out the window again.
Looking at something distant.
Past the parking lot.
Past the trees.
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Brookelyn Walker
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Khairul Ahsan 01 January 2014

Your poem and the accompanying notes about the poem have touched me. The poem is well written, as it describes your pains and thoughts crystal clear.

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Roseann Shawiak 05 December 2013

Can definitely feel your pain and sadness at not having your mother be whole - be there for you. Can't blame you for wanting to escape. Hope you find your way through poetry, it's a good way to keep your balance, you can send everything you feel into the universe and get it out of you. Thank you for sharing your poetry, it's very good. Look forward to reading more of it as I have time. RoseAnn

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