Thursday, March 16, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

Help me, I'm over the limit. The demon's are calling for my soul;
The clock's ticking, as the ground begins to swallow me whole.
As i shout, 'can you hear me? ' 'is there anybody there? '
There must be someone waiting, Someone who cares.
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nicola burkett
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Elya Thorn 16 March 2006

this is very original, the imagery and the way you've expressed your emotions it's very beautiful and creative! you have a 10 from me! Elya Thorn

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