Wednesday, September 15, 2021

Someone To Laugh With Comments

Rating: 5.0

Never asking for anything
Simply waiting for your time
I'll be better off without you
You'll see. I will be fine.
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RACHEL ZARANTONELLO
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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 October 2021

Excellent poem, dear Poetess!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 October 2021

Watching you go now, leaves my heart in pain. An emptiness without you My mind cannot explain. I have cited your last lines here. Very very sadTrue saddest poem full of melancholy.5 Stars full for YOU!

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RACHEL ZARANTONELLO 12 April 2023

Thank you for your kind words. The best poetry often comes from a broken heart.

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