Wednesday, July 16, 2014

Someone Stole The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Someone stole the moon last night
Left the land bereft of light
Sorrow filled the sequinned sky
And all the stars began to cry
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Valerie Dohren
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Shaun Cronick 26 November 2019

Valerie, in the words of the immortal Bette Davie form the classic film Now Voyager... " Oh Jerry, don't let's ask for the moon. We have the stars." A joy to read. And I thank you for writing and sharing magical poem. Loved It!

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Om Chawla 06 July 2015

Wonderful, wonderful poem! ! ! , Val. Loved it.

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Valerie Dohren 06 July 2015

Thank you Om. Pleased you liked it.

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Shahzia Batool 26 May 2015

Fertile imagination rhythmic creativity...nice as always!

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Indira Babbellapati 21 April 2015

lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Achill Lad 12 September 2014

A lovely poem, so original. Flows wonderfully. (10)

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Leah Ayliffe 19 August 2014

Vividly and hauntingly beautiful. I am in love with the moon, i don't know what we would do without her glow. Never stop writing!

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Ken E Hall 29 July 2014

Glad the moon got stolen for you would not have written this wonder of a poem originality seems to be your ploy. love the end too...regards

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 26 July 2014

Moon disappearing has disastrous effects. No tides. No nights of moonlit love. Beautiful poem.

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Dave Walker 23 July 2014

I will look out of the window tonight to see if it's still there. A great poem.

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John Brown 22 July 2014

I love this one. So many things we take for granted - and shouldn't.

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Sandra Feldman 22 July 2014

Who done it? An Agatha Christie, Mystery, She's quite novels, Changed her name, And now writes, The most beautiful, Poetry!

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Dinesan Madathil 19 July 2014

Someone stealing the Moon if he/she has not got a sky to put it on is blundering.... Your apprehension is a poetic notion that can leave all of us doomed to disaster.. I often wonder if one can steal our earth for a while! A fine poem, Val.

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Who needs the moon when you have penned a poetic sun that shines even in the night! Sorry my friend you have no sympathy from me! 10/10

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* Sunprincess * 16 July 2014

............ok everyone please remain calm....I am sending the FBI to investigate...I repeat please remain calm....they will get to the bottom of this case....do not worry!

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