Thursday, May 8, 2008

Someone Special Comments

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It was an early September morning
I hear my sister Katrina screaming in agony
My teenage body jumps out of bed
My mom says to me “Its Time! ”
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Beautiful Disaster
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Emma Adamyan 29 September 2009

what e lovely aunt u r! the poem like a lil sun and ur newborn niece like a lil ray of it. she hasnt known yet, but she got two mothers already, ur sis and u :) i loved the way u created this poem. well and blessed be ur niece

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Serenity Prayer 07 January 2009

my sister had a baby boy almost 4 years ago and i felt the same way bout him the way you do your neice. i was so nervous the 1st time i held him. lol. great job.

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Richa Dhodi 08 May 2008

ok cool. again a nice slab. your a nice girl and also emotion centric :) But thats the beauty of a poetess to undersatnd her feelings and give them the shape of 'words' lovely girl. keep going :)

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