Saturday, December 2, 2017

Someone's Daughter Comments

Rating: 5.0

For those who trot their masculinity upfront
Displaying their shields of steel
All but announcing "I am Man"
Know that I have petals of delicate bloom
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Susan Lacovara
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Yiyan Han 12 December 2017

Men in power Should all read this - thanks for sharing this powerful piece.

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Jette Blackstone 04 December 2017

This is a wonderful response to #me too and the backlash firings against powerful men who have been taking advantage of women for so many years. I have three sons and this is a poem they could read...a positive way to begin to tackle these problems and take away the defensiveness....a return to love and respect.

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Ravi Kopra 02 December 2017

your first look lingers In the stare of my eyes And does not slip to spindle down The length of my thighs......then you may say hello to me/if not, go find some bimbo/ don't come near me/I'll give you a karate kick in between your thighs/ and you'll run crying mama, mama/ and never look back at me...

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Sekharan Pookkat 02 December 2017

All love is not love though it seems love but to be recognised the flame that ignites through eyes! very powerful penning- I like the last stanza starting with I seek.........maiden, s heart.my ten+++++

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Susan Lacovara

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