Sunday, March 4, 2012

Someone Once Told Me Comments

Rating: 4.0

Someone once told me
What an uncle did to
his nephew
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Dave Alan Walker
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 17 March 2012

Another great poem from you big brother.

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Apphia Grimonia 16 March 2012

justice is coming and it's here to stay..really like these words...it's true...your poem really meaningful...thumb up :)

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Aman Sa 15 March 2012

This is wonderful flow, and having a perfectly glorious closing lines. I will regard it as a smart poem. Full ratings.

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Blue Moonlight 11 March 2012

I love how the sensitivity of the poem was focused on and yet, still it sounded innocent. A well-delivered piece, if I say so myself.

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Sanjibsaha Aniketa 09 March 2012

Yes, guilty always get away...... still justice comes & stay. It is a beautiful poem with inner brightness. Thanks a lot with your valuable comments & votes to the poem - overflow. Pl. go through other poems of Sanjibsaha Aniketa .

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Unwritten Soul 08 March 2012

Someone once told me This is a good poem but now I told someone who stopped by This is a nice poem The true fact, when someone once told me this i found it's right so i told someone else now this is nice, done by my brother Dave who's dare to give him 5? ? i give this full mark _lil soul

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Eva Evina 06 March 2012

Amazing poem :) would you like to comment my poem, Before The Story Begins? ? I like to read more of your poem :)

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Kevin Patrick 05 March 2012

This is a really depressing read, great but depressing, it always seems that their are stories about these things happening and they never end. Ultimately I do think some good happens. The closing is a great affirmation of hope. Keep faith

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 05 March 2012

This poem is a very touching yet sensitive subject. Still you excellently laid out the lines to create a forceful impact tot he reader and the last few lines resolved the injustice. Truth says there will always be a reckoning.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 05 March 2012

we always respond to our actions... life is the biggest judge...

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Gajanan Mishra 05 March 2012

Fine poem Dave. My good wishes to you all.

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Eric Cockrell 04 March 2012

we always suffer the costs of our actions in time... karma comes!

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