Someone Like Her Comments

i thought you might have meant candy-gloss, but i Googled candy-floss: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Definition of candy floss.1 British: cotton candy.2 usually candyfloss British: something attractive but insubstantial. yum, yum! where can i find a pair of those lips to press mine AGAINST? i think Annette, like another PH friend i REALLY admire, Is It Poetry, are 'afflicted' by the same syndrome: misplaced-apostrophe syndrome. ho ho. you are in good company, Annette. emoitions.............. i protest! one of me is enough! ! angles....i've seen that before, but maybe in geometry class, not high above. not that i will EVER get There! think of angels with gel in their hair. and spike heels. and that's just the guy angels! [but i think Keith has trouble with his counting. hee-hee. see his comment about angles/angels. well, at least he lovingly makes a suggestion. i just say YOU GOOFED! ] YES! i'll take 'someone like her'. make that two someones like her! i have an alter ego. bri ;)

Wonderful poem, very descriptive words full of beauty.

Her beauty untamed! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

Go on with some edition and perfection while posting. Thought is encouraging.

I love this beautiful, vivid, creative and moving write, you build the picture you are painting with your great choice of words!

I like your work Annette but can I lovingly suggest some careful editing? For example, a couple of times 'angles' seems to substitute for 'angels'. You deserve the care you need to give to your poetry and your life.