I never thought that when I woke today
It'd be the last time you opened your eyes
I can not say that I'm ok
Nor can I say that I'm alive
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Even more intriguing. I like how you use a deceased loved one to face and question the Afterlife (if there is one) . My sincere apologies and regards if this is based on true person.
This poem is really beautiful and sad...a candid expression of the heart...Lovely!
Just one big recycling program, hopefully not run by The State... nice