Wednesday, October 22, 2014

~someone Knows~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never thought that when I woke today
It'd be the last time you opened your eyes
I can not say that I'm ok
Nor can I say that I'm alive
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Chuy Amante 04 November 2014

Just one big recycling program, hopefully not run by The State... nice

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Sana Ghostana 25 October 2014

Even more intriguing. I like how you use a deceased loved one to face and question the Afterlife (if there is one) . My sincere apologies and regards if this is based on true person.

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Mihaela Pirjol 23 October 2014

This poem is really beautiful and sad...a candid expression of the heart...Lovely!

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