Someone Knocks At The Door - 08 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Someone Knocks At The Door - 08

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At last the moment
the most exotic moment
of her life came.

He entered
with a gush of
mild morning breeze.

He made her robes fly
and the skin underneath
shiver with a wave
shiver with a pleasure
in the sweet dream of
sharing that moment,
the moment of ecstasy
with her lover
then and there-
on the same road
hand in hand,
shoulder by shoulder,
on the same bed-
arm in arm,
palm in palm,
lips on lips,
and heart beats
resonating to
the song of eternal
love and bliss.

Saturday, March 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,love and dreams,seasons,spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 16 March 2018

on the same road hand in hand, shoulder by shoulder, on the same bed- arm in arm, palm in palm, lips on lips, Wow Sir, so romantic with the moment of Spring. Thanks. 10+++++++++++++

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Rajendra Rout 05 May 2018

I agree with you madam

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Prativa Rani 16 March 2018

on the same road hand in hand, shoulder by shoulder, on the same bed- arm in arm, palm in palm, lips on lips, Wow Sir, so romantic with the moment of Spring. Thanks. 10++++++++++

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Prativa Rani 16 March 2018

on the same road hand in hand, shoulder by shoulder, on the same bed- arm in arm, palm in palm, lips on lips, Wow Sir, so romantic with the moment of Spring. Thanks.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 05 March 2018

on the same bed- arm in arm, palm in palm, lips on lips, and heart beats A highly poem shared here. Sanjukta. 10+++++++++++++

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Rajendra Rout 05 May 2018

Sanjukta I agree with you.lt is a lovely poem

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Sanjukta Sahoo 05 March 2018

on the same bed- arm in arm, palm in palm, lips on lips, and heart beats A highly poem shared here. Sanjukta.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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