I saw him in the valleys
Around him were boys with little bellies
He came and passed through
As if a Flamingo just flew
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a good description of someone, , wwho is he Afrasiab, , , may be you are descibing yourself, , keep writing, , , i liked the compostion10++
A small thing 'Someone I Saw' became a nice poem. Nice imagery. love it and added my 10.