Sunday, May 10, 2009

Someone I Once Knew Comments

Rating: 5.0

The days of laughter that we shared
From the first moment that we paired
No one else could have ever compared
We did all that best friends do.
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Bilal Raja
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Rachel Butler 13 October 2009

A beautifully enigmatic bundle of fun Wherever you roamed, you were the sun Rachel Ann Butler

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Linda Weischedel 31 May 2009

Totally loved this poem. I give it a 10.

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I like the way your four rhymes to a stanza, and the poem sits nice and neatly across and down the page. Friendship does change as we change and you explain this creatively, with a creative twist in the last stanza. Great work! Karin Anderson

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