Monday, November 5, 2018

Someone Else's Heart Comments

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Missing you so badly
Here by myself
I always stop and pause
To look at your picture on the shelf
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Ray Hansell
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Practicing Poetess 05 November 2018

The reader can feel the wistfulness as they read this poem- - It's palpable! Two of the strongest feelings we will ever experience are BETRAYAL (for injustice done v.s. us) , and REGRET (for where we failed, and 'messed up'.) A very well-written and reflective poem.

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