Thursday, November 12, 2015

Someone Comments

Rating: 5.0

With the string of eyes
"Someone" is flying my heart like kite…

In this unknown world
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 13 November 2015

This SOMEONE is so beautiful................Asim 10+

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Souren Mondal 12 November 2015

We can only feel this 'someone' but never know who it is... A wonderful feeling that you represent wonderfully in a poem of nine couplets... Thanks Asim.10 :)

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Loke Kok Yee 12 November 2015

someone gives you a 10 thanks Asim

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 November 2015

Someone is writing comments by reading your poem and something is the reward for this someone.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2015

Someone with flying mind hear expresses love as someone is looking good in this interesting imagery. Being someone and writing this poem to witness is definitely wise expression....10

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