Somehow Surviving Comments

no doubt this world is a strange place to live as we sometimes dont want to live but we are still living....some time purposefully and other time purposelessly.....some time we dont want to do some action but unconsciously we are doing that.....nice poem rather nicest as it truly demonstrates human helplessness and of course can be called a poem a true representative of human emotions.....graetest effort.....wish you best of luck for your future..... Azhar a new member.....