Somehow Just A Thoughts.. Poem by Ging Taping

Somehow Just A Thoughts..

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Holding a piece of bread
Lady in red crossing the bridge..
On her way,
Wander
She found a cute puppy
Wonder what's the breed..
It's so adorable
puppy just gave her puppy eyes.
Caressing puppy's head
with her left hand then she left..
She walks fast into the woods
and escaped like Robin Hood.
She reach home went to her room.
Surprisingly she is rich..
She's hungry but not angry
Had a bowl of soup but tummy ached
Seated unto her bowl of throne
to release her stress..
She washed hand w/soap
Her skin is so soft..
She's now in front of the mirror
Shaking off the skirt she wore..
Begun each stroke applying makeup
Wishing this time she could make up..
Sitting on her chair
W/the same skirt she wear
she feel asleep,
wanting to relax to the max
Snoring, breathing
She sleep so deep..

Monday, June 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: self reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Light mood..slightly good..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 26 March 2016

Like a lady in red crossing the bridge of love! Nice work.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 June 2015

Wow an intriguing interesting poem and I like the way u related it in extraordinary poetic freeverse and the description is fascinating and unique. Thumbs up. Pls do review my latest poem too titled pop goes....

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