Monday, May 7, 2012

Someday, Maybe In A Different Time Comments

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Someday, somewhere in a different time,
The world grew faint as he became mine.
The waves began soaring under the moonlights shine,
As we listened intently to the songbirds rhyme.
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Abhilaasha Singh
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Abhilasha Singh 28 May 2012

Thanks a lot! Im glad you think so! :)

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Saadat Tahir 20 May 2012

nice rhythmical and charmingly beautiful...takes one on a journey of love and desire.... loadz of wet and a little whet.... :) very nice :)

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Abhilasha Singh 20 May 2012

Thank you! I hope you liked it? :)

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Indira Babbellapati 11 May 2012

there's a unique rhythm to ur poetry...

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