Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Someday In The Stream Comments

Rating: 4.8

If we could go back
to where we've been
if we could remember
those days we dreamed of someday
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Chitra - 08 October 2009

a great metaphorical write...a sense of nostalgia...flowing through these fine words

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Eyan Desir 08 October 2009

The poem is very nice but it has small errors good write

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Ency Bearis 07 October 2009

A metaphor of a kind...the stream of continuous friendship.... just only one noted 2nd stanza that doesn't make sense...maybe you mean.. to where we are....otherwise the contents are good....9

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