Sunday, March 15, 2009

Someday Comments

Rating: 5.0

he looks at me with those eyes and something inside begins to flare
it's like my entire soul burns with that single stare
just the way he smile makes me shiver inside
this feeling keeps growing and i can no longer hide
...
Read full text

kaylem 479
COMMENTS
Prince Obed de la Cruz 31 December 2009

very well expressed! .......

0 0 Reply
Marieta Maglas 29 July 2009

nice poem, well penned with lyric ideas.......10

0 0 Reply
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 08 April 2009

indeed let love come 2 u my friend its more sweeter that way =) nice write - mel

0 0 Reply
kaylem 479

kaylem 479

Lebak, Sultan Kudarat
Close
Error Success