Monday, January 3, 2005

Someday Comments

Rating: 2.5

someday when i'm older,
i will know how to write,
to draw pictures with my words
of days that were once bright.
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chelle santos
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Warren Augustus De Guzman 05 January 2005

I feel the bitter emotion. And a longing for change. Maybe an escape from something in the present. Your poetry is very honest. -war

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Steve De Marino 03 January 2005

Bitter, kinda edgy. Clunky rhythm, but over all decent,

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