Someday Comments

At last we see the light, it's been a long dark dreary journey. I pray the light continues and becomes blindingly bright.

Love is like gold, for it is tested by fire. A broken heart is fragile for some moments. It is true that we cannot mend a broken heart. No words are soothing enough to reach the deepness of the pain. Just to comfort you: That boy don't merit your love. There is somebody for you. As we say here in France, For every woman or men, there is always a pair of shoes dedicated to their feet... Carry-on writing. Writing feeds the soul and free the spirit.... A very nice write though coming from a broken heart... Keep-sharing your works of art, Silent Poet Girl. Virginia

This poem is deep, filled with love so pure, longing, and despair. You have captured the real deal in this touching write. My heart goes out to you. It takes great courage to love. Hope you have true love for yourself. In loving yourself you will find true love in another. No one can replace or mend our hearts, except ourselves. We are not marked by who loves us, but how we love. Such a great write, your heart beats with every line. So genuine, straight from your heart to mine. Keep penning, you have true talent. I thoroughly enjoy your work. Sincerely, Kara

YOU HAVE TO LEARN THE ART OF HIDING UR EMOTIONS. INSTEAD OF STATEMENTS TRY HINT THRU IMAGES OR SYMBOLS. NICE N SINCERE INDEED.

As long as you believe in someday, all hope is not gone. Love is like a diamond, everytime you look at it, it shines a different color. Nice poem.

The sweetness and bitterness of love..felt and written in pain. Wonderful.

best wishes Silent Poem Girl! I thought this poem has a great start but at the end I had to read it more then once. over all a good poem from the heart

Wow! This peom got to my emotions, I would love to come and read it again.... Great work!

I love this writing! ! ! I like the 1st part it tells about love and its feeling! ! ! !

As I started reading this, I was like 'Awe, how sweet, SO CUTE' Then you totally flipped it into pain. This was exceptional! Amazing work my friend.

great poem my friend..someone somewhere is looking for his real lover...don't loose hope!

You have captured the two extremes of love so well here... The exhilarating highs of love are only matched by the despairing lows... I love this poem...

the sweet and sour of love. so true, excellent write brought back many memories from my youth. hormones should never be mistaken for real love.

you will find real love, it will come. a great poem.