Sunday, January 31, 2016

Somebody (Song) Comments

Rating: 4.3

Straight streets he walks alone
No direction, displeased some
Within heart a ray of hope
Somebody will come
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Aabid Masroor
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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 29 July 2017

It is a nice poem. Enjoyable.Somebody will greet you.

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Roseann Shawiak 22 February 2016

Great poem of hope that someone will come and fill his empty heart with love. An unwavering faith that there will be someone to trust and give joy to him one day. Beautifully stated that all his love is in vain, as he looks toward the heavens above. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 31 January 2016

Beautiful poem about a wondering soul (I think) .

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