Some Where There Is A Rainbow Comments

a perfect.. or finesse of Hope? Loved the lines as much as to a fresh breath! ! ! Some days there will be some rain The clouds would float for me The sand of desert would be flooded again Some days if you are there with me. yet dear Poet I want my dryness of deserts for they keep some balance! ty for sharing though! ! 10+++++

To Akhtar Jawad, My dear father. My house is a home of 4 walls. But it would be a paradise when your would come to my home.

I hope to meet you in the paradise, but your house is also a paradise, make it more lovely. The poem is nice.

Thanks for sharing this optimistic poem. Liked it. Just know that there may be someone somewhere around, to appreciate! The last two lines are like the icing on a cake.