Some Things That I Have Known. Comments

I'm surprised your works haven't been published in book form. They certainly need to be.

Dave, I enjoyed your poem very much. I liked the repetition of the initial phrase, which made it more powerful. Well-constructed. Well-written.

This is a very delightful poem thank you for sharing.

This is magnificent writing. The rhyme-scheme is processed with success and the lines are a pleasure to read. You have done quite well here.