We weren't meant to live forever,
we're here today and gone tomorrow;
Father Time has pulled his lever,
enter now, the grief and sorrow.
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This was SO beautiful! Thank you for sharing your wisdom and heart!
Excellent. Rhymes were spot on. Meter perfect. But more than that exponentially, you absolutely nailed the message. We are survived by our deeds and the people whom they affect. Fantastic write. A full 10
Very nice poem, but how the truth hurts. It's comforting to know our loved ones are at peace, but how we suffer their absence. As long as we live, they will live - in our memories. You expressed this perfectly with your well-chosen words.