Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Some Things Beyond Control Comments

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In the course of man's expectation,
There are things beyond his control;
Even the rich, wise and strong
Sometimes can do nothing at all.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Anjandev Roy 20 April 2020

victors should stay humble......significant.......thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Luz Hanaii 20 May 2019

Giving you a great Big 10+++++

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Luz Hanaii 20 May 2019

" We must learn the lessons of life, That the victors should stay humble; And losers must learn to accept that Life has some things beyond control." This is extraordinary, full of wisdom, it flows so well, and the last stanza seals it with great wisdom. Thank you for sharing such great message with us. 🌹

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Thank you, dear Ma’am Luz for the heartwarming words of inspiration πŸ™πŸ™πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Avid Fan 30 April 2019

In the course of man's expectation, There are things beyond his control; Even the rich, wise and strong Sometimes can do nothing at all. An exceptional poem, sir Bernard.

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Matthew Holloway 08 December 2018

This is a truly wonderful write full of memorable lines

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Thanks, Matthew for the humbling remarkπŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Jennifer Birchall 08 December 2018

Nor footprints be picked up by the hand... I love this. A wonderful poem Bernard.

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Thanks, dear Ma’am Jen for your lovely commentπŸ™πŸ™πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Richard Wlodarski 01 November 2017

So very true! And so wise! Excellent write, Bernard.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 November 2017

Thanks, Richard...I will forever treasure your comment.....

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