Monday, October 15, 2007

Some Tears Taste Good Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some tears taste
like pure, clear spring water,
despite the salt,
and despite the fact that you know
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Marc Mannheimer
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Brian Mills 15 October 2007

awesome awesome write! ! ! njoy'd immensly.....thnx for sharing (10) my friend! ! ! keep em comming! ! Brian~

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Chris Mendros 15 October 2007

Wow! where to begin? Evocative, with strong imagery, and so well worded. Flows impeccably well, and the rhymes just fall in so naturally. The message- tho strong- is almost secondary to the masterful penning here. Nice work.

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